Second Video

I completed my first video!!! I even added music and sound effects; the only sad thing is that it's 20 seconds!!! So, for my second video, I want it to be longer with more impact! I'm thinking about having less animation and more words (like that Christmas ad about how much money consumers use).

Also, above is a video I found about adult literacy I found really intriguing--it became my inspiration for the second video, in fact!
Here's a sneak peak of my second video:

I know it's not the best looking video image.... I'm not an artist, but I think animation is fun! UPDATE: This scene isn't even in the video because I decided this wasn't realistic.